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I wrote this while I was very, very angry about commercialism of life.
Also, I was feeling inspired. Plus, I was deeply in love with the idea of using a relationship to point out the problems in American Culture.
Side Note 1: I am an American.
Side Note 2: Yes, I know "Saying Sorry" is a Hawthorne Heights song. But I thought it was an apt title for this poem.
Side Note 3: Yes, I know I may get lots of FLAMES for this. But I didn't write it to please people. If I wrote to please everyone, I'd never pick up a pen again...
Also, I was feeling inspired. Plus, I was deeply in love with the idea of using a relationship to point out the problems in American Culture.
Side Note 1: I am an American.
Side Note 2: Yes, I know "Saying Sorry" is a Hawthorne Heights song. But I thought it was an apt title for this poem.
Side Note 3: Yes, I know I may get lots of FLAMES for this. But I didn't write it to please people. If I wrote to please everyone, I'd never pick up a pen again...
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I especially love the first line and this part:
"Your guitar rifts were the stuff
of angels fucking and devils kissing
and the heavens falling apart ecstatically"
Though, I think the second stanza could have done without the quoting. Just personal preference though. Overall, I loved your use of brand-name imagery. It works well.
"Your guitar rifts were the stuff
of angels fucking and devils kissing
and the heavens falling apart ecstatically"
Though, I think the second stanza could have done without the quoting. Just personal preference though. Overall, I loved your use of brand-name imagery. It works well.